Pretty cool
It shows that you put some work into this, but ppl here (from what i've noticed) are looking for hard hitting base and less intro time to songs. They're a hard audience to please. I think you need some more changes in your song, you have one at the end but 90 percent of the song is pretty much the same. You may have added a little part to it, but it needs more.
What are you using to make your songs? I really like the instruments you are using. Starting at 1:00 what are the two first instruments or synth you are using? Thanks.
4/5 -- 8/10
Good luck in the future!
Fox-Donut